March 25, 2009

Ochena Ami


Bhaab-jagot e baas e moner. Ek songeetpriyo hridoy ja brishti-bheja matir subase mataal hoy,bhorer alor prothom kirone khonje prerona.. shishir er alok chhotay khunje fere swapnalu ek jagot, onekta sei Swabhab kobir moto.... jar kono "ek din" kate ek janlar dhare bose; jar swapno-asha-bhalobasa makha ek chokh nijer ojante, anmone khunje beray ojana kichhu.... ja thik bornonar oteet.. Asole bastober kothinotake aswekar kore Swapno jagot er bilasitay baas kore e mon amar... Hoyto Sarolota er swabhabgoto boishishto bolei

1 comment:

carcrazy said...

good composition,good use of words and scentence structure,this is only possible for rich beng vocabulary and u sensibly used it,but u hv mis used the definition of simplicity(saralata).and that fact made the 'achena ami'confusing,so urs 'achena ami''s name is appropriate.coz achena somtimes, makes 1 confused..[:)]